revised draft

Frequency: 7.012.3 per million words

a version of the draft that has been changed or improved

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Examples (20)

  • The project manager circulated the revised draft of the project plan for final comments.
  • The team submitted a revised draft of the proposal.
  • After weeks of negotiation, the lawyers agreed on a revised draft of the contract.
  • Please review the revised draft by Friday.
  • The author submitted a revised draft of her manuscript based on the editor's feedback.
  • She spent hours perfecting the revised draft of her novel.
  • The committee is now reviewing the revised draft of the proposed legislation.
  • The lawyer presented a revised draft of the contract to his client.
  • Have you had a chance to look at the revised draft I sent yesterday?
  • After feedback, we prepared a significantly revised draft.
  • We will send you the revised draft for approval by the end of the week.
  • The committee approved the revised draft for final publication.
  • A revised draft of the report was issued to all stakeholders.
  • Have you seen the latest revised draft of the policy document?
  • Although the initial proposal was rejected, the revised draft incorporates many of the suggested changes.
  • They are currently working on a revised draft of the script.
  • Please ensure all your changes are included in this revised draft.
  • A revised draft incorporating all suggestions is due next week.
  • The latest revised draft is saved on the shared drive under the 'Finals' folder.
  • We need to circulate the revised draft to all stakeholders.